Tuesday Homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I was afraid of many things when I was a child.

>> CORRECT!
I think the most afraid thing was darkness, because if it\'s dark I can\'t see anything so I can\'t know who is with me.

>> I think the thing I was most afraid of was darkness because if it\'s dark, I can\'t see anything, so I can\'t know who is with me.
But I\'m not afraid of darkness because it\'s not that dark even if it\'s midnight and I trusted that there are monsters before, 

>> But I was not afraid of the darkness itself because it\'s not that dark even if it\'s midnight, I thought that there were monsters before.

but I know that there are no monsters know, so I\'m not afraid of darkness.

>> Now I know that there are no monsters so I\'m not afraid of the dark anymore.