Tuesday Homework

2021-11-03 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:Are you afraid of getting old? Why or why not? A:Sometimes, I feel afraid of getting old, but most of the times, I\'m not. Getting old is actually a natural thing, so most of the times, I\'m not afraid of it. Also, it\'s hard to feel that I\'m getting old, because I\'m young now.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


Sometimes, I feel afraid of getting old, but most of the times, I\'m not.

>> Sometimes I feel afraid of getting old, but most of the time I\'m not.
Getting old is actually a natural thing, so most of the times, I\'m not afraid of it.

>> Getting old is actually a natural thing, so most of the time, I\'m not afraid of it.
Also, it\'s hard to feel that I\'m getting old, because I\'m young now.

>> Also, it\'s hard to feel that I\'m getting old because I\'m still young.

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