Tuesday Homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think it\'s wrong to keep wild animals in a zoo.

>> CORRECT!
Wild animals can lose their Instinct if they stay in a zoo.

>> Wild animals can lose their instincts if they stay in a zoo.
Also, zoo is only for peoples\' happiness, so it doesn\'t matter about wild animals\' freedom.

>> Also, the zoo is only for peoples\' happiness, so the freedom of wild animals doesn\'t matter much.