Tuesday Homework

2021-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:Who is the most important person in your life? A:The most important people in my life is my parents. My parents taught me how to walk or speak and taught me the etiquette of our country. Also, they helped me when I need a help, so I think my parents are the most important people in my life.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


The most important people in my life is my parents.

>> The most important people in my life are my parents.
My parents taught me how to walk or speak and taught me the etiquette of our country.

>> CORRECT!
Also, they helped me when I need a help, so I think my parents are the most important people in my life.

>> Also, they helped me when I needed help, so I think my parents are the most important people in my life.

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