Tuesday Homework

2021-12-29 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Q:What are some New Year\'s resolutions you have made in the past? A:I made a resolutions that I\'ll not lie and I\'ll exercise everyday. I tried to succeed it but I didn\'t, so I want to succeed New Year\'s resolutions next year. I think my New Year\'s resolutions will be same every year, so I\'ll try to succeed the resolutions.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I made a resolutions that I\'ll not lie and I\'ll exercise everyday.

>> I made resolutions that I\'ll not lie and I\'ll exercise everyday.
I tried to succeed it but I didn\'t, so I want to succeed New Year\'s resolutions next year.

>> I tried to succeed in doing it but I didn\'t, so I want to succeed on my New Year\'s resolutions for next year.
I think my New Year\'s resolutions will be same every year, so I\'ll try to succeed the resolutions.

>> I think my New Year\'s resolutions will be the same every year, so I\'ll try to succeed in these resolutions.

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