Tuesday Homework

2022-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:What new thing would you like to try this year? A:I would like to try running our town twice without resting. I think I always rest for once or twice, and it means my lung capacity is not that good. Also, if I run our town twice without rest, I can make my immunity better then before.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I would like to try running our town twice without resting.

>> I would like to try running around our town twice without resting.
I think I always rest for once or twice, and it means my lung capacity is not that good.

>> I think I always rest once or twice, and it means my lung capacity is not that good.
Also, if I run our town twice without rest, I can make my immunity better then before.

>> Also, if I run around our town twice without resting, I can make my immunity better than before.

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