Tuesday homework

2022-01-19 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:Would you ever consider going skydiving? Why or why not? A:I\'ve never considered going skydiving. I have a lot of fears, and I also have a little bit of acrophobia. But I was afraid of skiing before, but I don\'t now because I expierenced it a lot, so I think the fear for skydiving will be disapper when I try it once.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I\'ve never considered going skydiving.

>> CORRECT!
I have a lot of fears, and I also have a little bit of acrophobia.

>> CORRECT!
But I was afraid of skiing before, but I don\'t now because I expierenced it a lot, 

>> I was afraid of skiing before, but I don\'t anymore because I experience it a lot.

so I think the fear for skydiving will be disapper when I try it once.

>> So I think the fear of skydiving will disappear when I try it once.

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