Tuesday Homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think internet cannot perfectly replace books.

>> I think the internet cannot perfectly replace books.
If someone search something in internet for a long time, then his or her eyes can be tired easily.

>> If someone searches for something on the internet for a long time, then his or her eyes can get tired easily.
Also, in internet, it could be easier to find what I want to, but it could be harder because there are so many document.

>> In addition, it could be easier to find what I want to find in the internet, but it could also be hard because there are so many documents.