Tuesday Homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

Saving money is important when a emergency comes.

>> Saving money is important especially when there\'s an emergency.
If a person uses money systematically, then emergency could not come, but sometimes some robbers or scammers can steal my money.

>> If a person uses money systematically, he doesn\'t need to worry when there\'s an emergency, but sometimes some robbers or scammers can steal the money.
If I don\'t save money and this situation comes, then it would be hard to keep live stably.

>> If I don\'t save money and this situation comes, then it would be hard to keep life stable.