Tuesday homework

2022-04-29 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:What\'s the most beautiful place you\'ve ever been to? A:The most beautiful place was Niagara Falls. I\'ve went there when I was in third grade of elementary school, but I vividly remember the huge waterfall. It was beautiful because there was a water fall and I\'ve ridden a boat there.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


The most beautiful place was Niagara Falls.

>> CORRECT!
I\'ve went there when I was in third grade of elementary school, but I vividly remember the huge waterfall.

>> CORRECT!
It was beautiful because there was a water fall and I\'ve ridden a boat there.

>> It was beautiful because there was a waterfall and I\'ve ridden a boat there.

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