Tuesday Homework

2022-05-06 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:Do you think it’s important to spend time by yourself? A:I think it\'s important to spend time by myself. If I think something by myself and find the answer then I can be smarter. Also, I think person can grow fastest when the person solve something by himself or herself.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I think it\'s important to spend time by myself.

>> CORRECT!
If I think something by myself and find the answer then I can be smarter.

>> If I think about something by myself and find the answer then I can become smarter.
Also, I think person can grow fastest when the person solve something by himself or herself.

>> Also, I think a person can grow more mature when he or she solves something by himself or herself.

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