Tuesday Homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

The disadvantages of technology is most technology destroys nature.

>> The disadvantages of technology is most technologies destroy nature.
I think nature must be remain for a long time, because the world can\'t be fit without nature.

>> I think nature must remain for a long time, because the world can\'t be fit without nature.
And, if the nature is totally destroyed, then a lot of bad effects will come.

>> And, if nature is totally destroyed, then a lot of bad effects will come.