Tuesday Homework

2022-07-07 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Q:What was the most memorable food or activity that you have tried while traveling? A:The most memorable activity was riding boat in Niagara Falls. I got wet, but it was fun and also, I was surprised by the scale of falls. And the most memorable food is Lobster because it was my first Lobster.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


The most memorable activity was riding boat in Niagara Falls.

>> The most memorable activity was riding a boat in Niagara Falls.
I got wet, but it was fun and also, I was surprised by the scale of falls.

>> I got wet, but it was fun and I was also surprised by the scale of the falls.
And the most memorable food is Lobster because it was my first Lobster.

>> The most memorable food I had is Lobster because it was my first time to eat Lobster at that time.

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