Tuesday Homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

Privacy is my own information, so if others know that, then they can use it in bad way.

>> Privacy is my own information, so if others know that, then they can use it in a bad way.
Like they can be myself in online world or they can spread it to everywhere.

>> Like they can pretend to be me online or they can spread it everywhere.
Also, they can change my characteristic by using those.

>> CORRECT!