Tuesday Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: Why are some people very competitive?
A: I think it\'s because they want to be the best.
If someone is the best of something, then many people can believe that person more than before.
Also, the person can be popular by being the best.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I think it\'s because they want to be the best.
>> CORRECT!
If someone is the best of something, then many people can believe that person more than before.
>> If someone is the best in something, then more people can believe in that person more than before.
Also, the person can be popular by being the best.
>> CORRECT!
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