Tuesday Homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I like playing games, exercising, and watching tv or phone.

>> I like playing games, exercising, and watching tv or on my phone.
I like playing games because I can spend time with a lot of entertainments if I play games.

>> I like playing games because I can spend time with a lot of entertainment when I play them.
Also, exercising is good for our health, and I can also meet a lot of entertainments in tv or phone.

>> Also, exercising is good for our health.

and I can also meet a lot of entertainments in tv or phone.

>> I can also have a lot of entertainment by watching tv or on my phone.