Tuesday Homework

2022-12-23 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q: If someone would give you a million dollars, what changes would you do in your city? A: I think I\'ll just save it in my bank and use it when I need it. I don\'t want to waste my money in instant things, or bad things, so I think saving them in my bank is the best way for me. Or I\'ll just donate it to the poors.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:

I think I\'ll just save it in my bank and use it when I need it.
>> CORRECT!
I don\'t want to waste my money in instant things, or bad things, so I think saving them in my bank is the best way for me.
>> I don\'t want to waste my money with unnecessary things, so I think saving them in my bank is the best way for me.
Or I\'ll just donate it to the poors.
>> Or I\'ll just donate it to the poor.

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