Tuesday Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: What two things would you like to see or do this year?
A: I want to learn more skills in fighting like boxing and I want to see a stronger me.
I want to learn more skills in fighting because I think I should be able to protect my body from some dangers in the world.
Also, I need to be stronger to protect myself.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I want to learn more skills in fighting like boxing and I want to see a stronger me.
>> CORRECT!
I want to learn more skills in fighting because I think I should be able to protect my body from some dangers in the world.
>> CORRECT!
Also, I need to be stronger to protect myself.
>> CORRECT!
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