Tuesday Homework

2023-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q: What goals do you have in your life? A: I have a goal to make more than one program. I think it won\'t be hard to do this goal, because my dream is programmer. Also, another goal is always saving money so I could renew the most numerous money that I got.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I have a goal to make more than one program.

>> CORRECT!
I think it won\'t be hard to do this goal, because my dream is programmer.

>> I think it won\'t be hard to do this goal, because my dream is to be a programmer.
Also, another goal is always saving money so I could renew the most numerous money that I got.

>> Also, another goal is always saving money so I could add more to the money that I got.

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