Tuesday Homework

2023-02-21 · 첨삭 강사 Elea

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Q: Write 5 things that a person can do to have a good night\'s sleep. A: A person can stay away from his or her phone to have a good night\'s sleep. Also, a person can close eyes and lie on the bed or turn off the light to have a good night\'s sleep too. And they can think about today or tomorrow or listen to white noises too.

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Hi [이름]! Happy Tuesday. Always remember that as a student the most important thing to remember is that laziness is your worst enemy and hard work is your best friend. ^^

A: A person can stay away from his or her phone to have a good night\'s sleep.
Also, a person can close eyes and lie on the bed or turn off the light to have a good night\'s sleep too.
And they can think about today or tomorrow or listen to white noises too.
>> A person can stay away from his or her phone to have a good night\'s sleep. Also, a person can close their eyes and lie on the bed or turn off the light to have a good night\'s sleep. And they can think about what\'s ahead today and tomorrow or listen to white noises.

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