Tuesday Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: What matters to you, having a beautiful face or having a great attitude? Why?
A: I think having a great attitude is better than having a beautiful face.
If a person has beautiful face, he or she could look great at first, but the person has a bad attitude, no one would like him or her.
But if a person has a great attitude, many people would like the person.
강사 첨삭
Great work, [이름]! You did great in giving your opinion about the topic. I like how you answered the question intelligently! Keep it up! ^^
~T. ELEA
A: I think having a great attitude is better than having a beautiful face.
If a person has beautiful face, he or she could look great at first, but the person has a bad attitude, no one would like him or her.
But if a person has a great attitude, many people would like the person.
If a person has beautiful face, he or she could look great at first, but the person has a bad attitude, no one would like him or her.
But if a person has a great attitude, many people would like the person.
>>I think having a great attitude is better than having a beautiful face.
If a person has a beautiful face, he or she could look great at first, but if the person has a bad attitude, no one would like him or her.
But if a person has a great attitude, many people would like the person.
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