Tuesday, September 14, 2021 Claire
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강사 첨삭
Hello Claire!
Thanks for your efforts this week! Have a happy Chu[이름]k with your family.
~~Teacher Kate
I’m scared of some stuff that my friends are also scared of.
>>CORRECT!
First, horror stories.
>>First, it\'s horror stories.
I don’t believe ghosts but I’m scared of hearing spooky legend stories that ghosts appear in.
>>I don’t believe in ghosts but I’m scared of listening to spooky legends where ghosts appear in.
Because scary legend stories make me imagine of them.
>>Because scary legends make me imagine of them.
When I keep images of them, I keep images of scary faces of ghosts.
>>When I imagine them, I also keep imagining the scary face
I’m not scared because I believe ghosts but as I said above, I don’t like the cruel and scary faces of ghosts.
>>I’m not scared because I believe in ghosts but as I said above, I don’t like the cruel and scary faces of ghosts.
Their faces keep appearing when I close my eyes after seeing or hearing horror stories.
>>CORRECT!
Second, insects.
>>Second, they are insects.
I think this is a different kind of fierce but I’m also scared of seeing, touching, or listening to bugs.
>>I think this is a different kind of fear but I’m also scared of seeing, touching, or listening to bugs.
I hate every part of bugs.
>>CORRECT!
Even butterflies. When we see closely at butterflies, their body looks like caterpillars.
>>I\'m even scared of butterflies. When I look at them closely, their bodies look like caterpillars.
Third, I’m scared of something that is unknown.
>>CORRECT!
I think this kind of scariness is human essence.
>>I think this kind of fear is part of human nature.
Humans have natural scariness with unknown things.
>>Humans have a natural fear of the unknown.
However, I’m scared of unknown things such as the deep sea, or space.
>>CORRECT!
When I imagine myself under the deep sea, sometimes I feel weird for no reason.
>>CORRECT!
Also, if I think of space and an unknown creature in space, I feel weird again.
>>CORRECT!
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