Tuesdays people don\\\'t read books

2020-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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firstable, people don\'t read enough books I like read a book so, usually I want talk or discuss about the book which I read before. but these days I can\\\'t find a person who read a book and talk with me. Why they don\'t read book? there are a lots of media things we can watch and interesting things. but we watching a lot. so people find more provocative media and more funny things but I think books are nor provocative as media. so people don\'t want read a book. probably they think books are not interesting. as result, people don\'t think deeply and weigh. they just want to get knowledge directly from TV or internet. the problem is that people don\'t think and not creative as before. and they can\'t understand other people\'s feeling. if we read a book, we can be other people(main character)during reading. so we can understand how feeling is they are in the books. I really feel sorry about that. I hope people read a books and can understand each other.

강사 첨삭

Good evening [이름]-Li! :)
Thank you for taking the time to do our essay homework.
I\'m always impressed with how you convey your thoughts about social issues.
They\'re always concise and on-point.
Keep writing and expressing your opinions. I would love to read all of them. ^^
See you in class later.
~Charry


firstable, people don\'t read enough books
>> First of all, people don\'t read enough books.
I like read a book
>> I like reading a book.
so, usually I want talk or discuss about the book which I read before.
>> So usually, I want to talk or discuss about the book which I read before.
but these days I can\\\'t find a person who read a book and talk with me.
>> But these days, I can\'t find a person who reads a book and can talk about it with me.
Why they don\'t read book?
>> Why don\'t they read books?
there are a lots of media things we can watch and interesting things.
>> there are lots of interesting media contents and other things that we can watch.

but we watching a lot.
>> We watch them a lot.
so people find more provocative media and more funny things
>> People find provocative media contents and funnier things more interesting.
but I think books are nor provocative as media.
>> But I think books are not as provocative as the media.
so people don\'t want read a book.
>> So people don\'t want to read a book.
probably they think books are not interesting.
>> They probably think books are not interesting.
as result, people don\'t think deeply and weigh.
>> As a result, people don\'t think deeply and weigh things well.
they just want to get knowledge directly from TV or internet.
>> They just want to get knowledge directly from the TV or the internet.
the problem is that people don\'t think and not creative as before.
>> The problem is that people don\'t think and are not ad creative as before.
and they can\'t understand other people\'s feeling.
>> They also can\'t understand other people\'s feelings.
if we read a book, we can be other people(main character)during reading.
>> If we read a book, we can imagine that we are the main character from the book that we are reading.
so we can understand how feeling is they are in the books.
>> So, we can understand the feelings of the character in the books.
I really feel sorry about that.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I\'m really sorry for those people who don\'t read enough.
I hope people read a books and can understand each other.
>> I hope people read books and learn to understand each other.

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