Tuesdays people don\\\'t read books
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Good evening [이름]-Li! :)
Thank you for taking the time to do our essay homework.
I\'m always impressed with how you convey your thoughts about social issues.
They\'re always concise and on-point.
Keep writing and expressing your opinions. I would love to read all of them. ^^
See you in class later.
~Charry
>> First of all, people don\'t read enough books.
I like read a book
>> I like reading a book.
so, usually I want talk or discuss about the book which I read before.
>> So usually, I want to talk or discuss about the book which I read before.
but these days I can\\\'t find a person who read a book and talk with me.
>> But these days, I can\'t find a person who reads a book and can talk about it with me.
Why they don\'t read book?
>> Why don\'t they read books?
there are a lots of media things we can watch and interesting things.
>> there are lots of interesting media contents and other things that we can watch.
but we watching a lot.
>> We watch them a lot.
so people find more provocative media and more funny things
>> People find provocative media contents and funnier things more interesting.
but I think books are nor provocative as media.
>> But I think books are not as provocative as the media.
so people don\'t want read a book.
>> So people don\'t want to read a book.
probably they think books are not interesting.
>> They probably think books are not interesting.
as result, people don\'t think deeply and weigh.
>> As a result, people don\'t think deeply and weigh things well.
they just want to get knowledge directly from TV or internet.
>> They just want to get knowledge directly from the TV or the internet.
the problem is that people don\'t think and not creative as before.
>> The problem is that people don\'t think and are not ad creative as before.
and they can\'t understand other people\'s feeling.
>> They also can\'t understand other people\'s feelings.
if we read a book, we can be other people(main character)during reading.
>> If we read a book, we can imagine that we are the main character from the book that we are reading.
so we can understand how feeling is they are in the books.
>> So, we can understand the feelings of the character in the books.
I really feel sorry about that.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I\'m really sorry for those people who don\'t read enough.
I hope people read a books and can understand each other.
>> I hope people read books and learn to understand each other.
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