Tulips?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t like tulips that much.
I\'m not have interesting the flowers.
But, I often buy the flowers.
Especially, May is family month in Korea.
So, this month I sometimes bought flowers.
And today I will buy the tulips.
Because, today is rose day.
Rose day is man give to roses to woman.
Maybe it is sales gimmick.
But if I don\'t give to roses, my wife is really sullen.
So today I buy the tulips.
My wife like the tulips.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mathew!^^
I\'m not have interesting the flowers.
Especially, May is family month in Korea.
So, this month I sometimes bought flowers.
And today I will buy the tulips. Because, today is rose day.
Rose day is man give to roses to woman.
Maybe it is sales gimmick.
But if I don\'t give to roses, my wife is really sullen.
So today I buy the tulips.
>> So today, I bought tulips.
Tulips are actually expensive here in the Philippines.
I think tulips are elegant flowers.
However, Iprefer the sunflower compared to tulip.
Andrea
I don\'t like tulips that much.
>> Correct
I\'m not have interesting the flowers.
>> I am not interested in flowers.
But, I often buy the flowers.
>> But I often buy flowers.
Especially, May is family month in Korea.
>> Especially that May is the family month in Korea.
So, this month I sometimes bought flowers.
>> So this month, I bought flowers quite a lot.
And today I will buy the tulips. Because, today is rose day.
>> And today, I will buy tulips because today is a rose day.
Rose day is man give to roses to woman.
>> Rose Day is the day when a man gives a woman a flower.
Maybe it is sales gimmick.
>> Maybe it is a sales gimmick.
But if I don\'t give to roses, my wife is really sullen.
>> But if I don\'t give roses to my wife she will be sullen.
So today I buy the tulips.
>> So today, I bought tulips.
My wife like the tulips.
>> My wife tulips.
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