turn on the radio

2021-08-02 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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Actually, I didn\'t listen to the radio often. sometimes i did listen to the radio when i did drive a car with my mother. I usually listen to music when i did driving. but my mather has diffrent music style with me. So, I did listen to the radio when i did driving with mother. when i was seventeen. why every day night i listen to radio. because my favorite singer was radio mc at that times, i send a many massage to radio kkk I wish mc read a my maasage. but now, he dosen\'t radio mc. So, i\'m not interesting to radio. what why, i don\'t listen to the radio often.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon [이름]! 
Still having a good day! 
Turn on the radio to make it more fun :) 

Actually, I didn\'t listen to the radio often.
>>> Actually, I don\'t listen to the radio often.
sometimes i did listen to the radio when i did drive a car with my mother.
>>> I sometimes listen to the radio when I\'m with mom. 
I usually listen to music when i did driving. but my mather has diffrent music style with me.
>>> I usually listen to music when I drive, but my mother and I have different music preferences. 
So, I did listen to the radio when i did driving with mother.
>>> I listen to the radio when I\'m driving with mom. 
when i was seventeen. 
>>> When I was seventeen. 
why every day night i listen to radio.
>>> Why do I listen to the radio every night?
because my favorite singer was radio mc
>>> Because my favorite singer was the radio MC.
at that times, i send a many massage to radio kkk
>>> At that time, I send a lot of message to the radio.
I wish mc read a my maasage.
>>> I hope the MC read my messages. 
but now, he dosen\'t radio mc.
>>> But he doesn\'t host in radio now. 
So, i\'m not interesting to radio.
>>> So, I\'m not interested in listening to the radio. 

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