Tursday's Homework
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Hi Debby
Yup, it is happy Thursday. Because I only have a one lecture today! I can take a break a little than before.
I have seen a lot of friends to study English. Almost all friends study English. But I haven't seen any friend to study for talking. It means they only learn writing, reading, listening. I think that studying speaking for talking with foreigners is really nice thing. But my friends don't think like that I guess. I suggested learning a speaking several times but they said, "I don't want".
It is sad that there arent' any friend to share my ideas about learning a speaking. If I were an outgoing person, I could make a foreign friend...
Take care :P
<Essay>
My dad's word, "Cheer up" was the most encouraging word among words that I ever heard. Although it was a very short word, I could have courage that I can make it. When I went to take an exam, I often heard it. Of course I heard it lately. How about you?
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]^^
\"Cheer up\" ^^
I do like hearing that and that is one thing that I often hear from Koreans.
I really do think that it is encouraging. Yes you are outgoing so do not worry, you\'ll have ways to study speaking
on your own time.^^ Maybe your friends haven\'t tried it yet or just maybe they are not comfortable speaking English yet.
You have to put in mind that like any other thing, knowledge gets old and if unused or not expressed it\'s just a waste. You\'ll just forget it if you do not use it.
Your sentences are getting better. Just a few errors but it\'s minimal.
My most encouraging word is from my mom. \"Life is what you make it\"
It means that whatever I do would be what becomes of my life and if I fail, it\'s my own doing and if I succeed, it\'s because I did well. :)
Take care^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you:
Hi DebbyYup, it is happy Thursday. Because I only have a one lecture today! I can take a break a little than before.
>> Yup, it is happy Thursday because I only have a one lecture today! I can have a lottle more break than before.
I have seen a lot of friends to study English.
>> I have seen a lot of friends that study English.
Almost all friends study English.
>> Almost all of my friends study English.
But I haven\'t seen any friend to study for talking.
>> But I haven\'t seen any friend study for talking.
It means they only learn writing, reading, listening.
>> CORRECT
OR> They only focus on writing, reading and listening.
I think that studying speaking for talking with foreigners is really nice thing.
>> I think that studying speaking for talking with foreigners is a really nice thing.
But my friends don\'t think like that I guess.
>> CORRECT
Or> My friends don\'t have the same idea I guess.
I suggested learning a speaking several times but they said, \"I don\'t want\".
>> I suggested learning speaking several times but they said, \"I don\'t want\".
It is sad that there arent\' any friend to share my ideas about learning a speaking.
>> It is sad that there aren\'t any friends to share my ideas about learning speaking.
If I were an outgoing person, I could make a foreign friend...
>> CORRECT
OR> I can meet a foreign friend if I\'m an outgoing person.
Take care :P>> CORRECT
OR> Be safe^^<Essay>My dad\'s word, \"Cheer up\" was the most encouraging word among words that I ever heard.
>> CORRECT
OR> The most encouraging was my dad\'s \" Cheer up\" phrase.^^
Although it was a very short word, I could have courage that I can make it.
>> CORRECT
OR> It might be short but it makes me courageous.
When I went to take an exam, I often heard it.
>> CORRECT
OR> I often hear it when I have an exam.
Of course I heard it lately. How about you?
>> CORRECT
OR> I have heard it many times. Do you have anything to share?
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