'Turtle ship'

Today, I went to Nam dae moon market with my mom and my sister. In there, there were a lot of people. Some of them were selling in their store and the other of them were buying a lot of things. We went there to buy clolored paper for my sister. Also to buy a Gundam for myselfe. We went to Alpha store to buy them. My sister really liked clolored paper, but I didn't really like any kind of Gundams in there. So, I decided to walk around the store and finally I chose what I want. It was 'Turtle ship'. This ship was made by Soon-shin Lee. He used Turtle ship' when he had war with Japanese. Also, I'm going to make this with my dad. I hope it will come out great boat. I really can't wait to make it with him.

A turtle ship sounds really cool--and I think I saw a real turtle ship on discovery channel. Anyway, have fun making the ship.;) -Teacher JM  Today, I went to Nam dae moon market with my mom and my sister. >>>Today, I went to the Nam dae moon market with my mom and my sister.In there, there were a lot of people. >>>Correct^^Some of them were selling in their store and the other of them were buying a lot of things. >>>Some of them were selling from their stores and the others were buying a lot of things.We went there to buy clolored paper for my sister. Also to buy a Gundam for myselfe. >>>We went there to buy colored papers for my sister and a Gundam for myself. We went to Alpha store to buy them. >>>We went to the Alpha store to buy those.My sister really liked clolored paper, but I didn't really like any kind of Gundams in there. >>>My sister really liked the colored papers but I didn't really like any Gundam toy there.So, I decided to walk around the store and finally I chose what I want.>>>So, I decided to walk around the store. Finally, I chose what I want.It was 'Turtle ship'.  >>>It was a 'Turtle ship'. This ship was made by Soon-shin Lee. >>>Correct^^He used Turtle ship' when he had war with Japanese.>>>He used a Turtle ship when our country had war with the Japanese.Also, I'm going to make this with my dad. >>>I'm going to make this with my dad.I hope it will come out great boat. >>>I hope it will come out to be a great boat.I really can't wait to make it with him. >>>Correct^^