TV
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Theme: [Writing Exercise] If you could be a STAR/CELEBRITY for just ONE DAY, in which local or international TV show would you like to appear?
It is Video Star.
I like that progrem because lots of famous people appear on the air.
Famous golf player, Park Se-ri, had appear on the air.
I like that progrem!
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!
I have heard of Video Star before, but I have only watched short clips on YouTube.
In my case, I\'d like to appear on The Return of Superman because the kids there are super adorable.
Thank you for answering your homework. See you on Wednesday.^^
__Teacher Mayleen :)
It is Video Star.
>>> I\'d like to appear on Video Star.
I like that progrem because lots of famous people appear on the air.
I like that progrem because lots of famous people appear on the air.
>>> I like that program because lots of famous people appear there.
Famous golf player, Park Se-ri, had appear on the air.
Famous golf player, Park Se-ri, had appear on the air.
>>> For example, the famous golf player, Park Se-ri, had appeared on Video Star.
I like that progrem!
I like that progrem!
>>> I like that program.
>>> OR: I like that program a lot!
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