twelfth homework
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There are about 3 customs visitors consider strange.
We don't usually do Dutch pay and one person treats other people.
For example, older person or superior officer pay for the dishes.
Particularly, Japanese where prefer Dutch pay don't understand such the Korean culture.
Second, as far as I know, foreigners always put on the slipper at home but Korean don't do that.
Korean bottom of room is very hot in winter and is so cool in summer.
Moreover, we almost always clean bottom of room with rag.
In this reason, Korean people don't put it them.
Finally, chopsticks are commonly used in Korean.
Though They are used in China and Japanese, anything else other countries people use fork and knife instead of chopsticks.
Foreigner might be difficult to use them but once they use them, they will find them convenient.
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There are about three customs visitors consider strange.
>> correct!
We don\'t usually do Dutch pay and one person treats other people.
>> correct!
For example, older person or superior officer pay for the dishes.
>> For example, the older person or superior officer pay for the dishes.
Particularly, Japanese where prefer Dutch pay don\'t understand such the Korean culture.
>> Japanese particularly who prefers Dutch pay don\'t understand such Korean culture.
Second, as far as I know, foreigners always put on the slipper at home but Korean don\'t do that.
>> correct!
Korean bottom of room is very hot in winter and is so cool in summer.
>> In Korea, the floor is very hot in winter and is so cool in summer.
Moreover, we almost always clean bottom of room with rag.
>> Moreover, we almost always clean the floor with a rag.
In this reason, Korean people don\'t put it them.
>> For this reason, we don\'t wear slippers inside the house.
Finally, chopsticks are commonly used in Korea.
>> correct!
Though They are used in China and Japanese, anything else other countries people use fork and knife instead of chopsticks.
>> Though these are used also in China and Japan, in other countries people use fork and knife instead of chopsticks.
Foreigner might be difficult to use them but once they use them, they will find them convenient.
>> Foreigners might find it difficult to use them but once they use them, they will find them convenient.
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