two assignment

2017-01-26 · 첨삭 강사 Megan

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"it's up to me", there are two important assignment I'm doing these days. One is to source raw materials for manufacturing our own product in our factory from China. Recently the price for raw material is buillish,and the price of chinese maker was more expensive than Korean domestic price. Fortunately, a few days went by, the Chinese maker offered $20 cheaper price than to prior one. it would be workable price level, even though it's slight higher level. we'll continue proceeding sample-test whether suitable for manufacturing or not. Another is to source raw material for new business. it would be really challenging, I've never experienced yet. A target product is strange thing, which is not chemicals, our division have never handled before. and I have to source from Chinese maker, but these days their supply is very tight. we have to wait for 2 months if we purchase right now. Maybe I should go to business trip to fix our quantity as enough as possible.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!!

There is a popular saying about the relationship between ascendancy and obligation  : With great power comes great responsibility!

It means what it says, if you are put in a position of having a lot of power, you also have a lot more responsibility than a person who is not so powerful. The office boy is not very powerful so can s[이름]p easily at night, the CEO is responsible for a great many things and may have a lot of worries. The President or Prime Minister even more so, whole countries are their responsibility.


REMEMBER:

Prepositions of Time - at, in, on

We use:

at-for a PRECISE TIME
in-for MONTHS, YEARS, CENTURIES and LONG PERIODS
on-for DAYS and DATES


Look at these examples:

*I have a meeting at 9am.
*The shop closes at midnight.
*Jane went home at lunchtime.
*In England, it often snows in December.
*Do you think we will go to Jupiter in the future?
*There should be a lot of progress in the next century.
*Do you work on Mondays?
*Her birthday is on 20 November.
*Where will you be on New Year\'s Day?


~ Teacher Megan~


HERE ARE MY CORRECTIONS:
there are two important assignment I\'m doing these days.

>> Correct.

OR

>> I have two important assignments these days.


 One is to source raw materials for manufacturing our own product in our factory from China.

>>  Correct.


Recently the price for raw material is bullish, and the price of chinese maker was more expensive than Korean domestic price.

>>  Correct.


Fortunately, a few days went by, the Chinese maker offered $20 cheaper price than to prior one. it would be workable price level,

>> Fortunately, a few days later, the Chinese maker offered a $20 cheaper price than the prior one. It would be on a workable price level,


even though it\'s slight higher level. we\'ll continue proceeding sample-test whether suitable for manufacturing or not.

>> even though it\'s slightly on a higher level. We\'ll continue proceeding sample-test to see whether its suitable for manufacturing or not.


Another is to source raw material for new business.

>> Correct.


it would be really challenging, I\'ve never experienced yet.

>> it would be a really challenging task, I\'ve never experienced something like it yet.


A target product is strange thing, which is not chemicals, our division have never handled before.

>> A target product is a strange thing, which is not chemicals and our division never handled that before.


and I have to source from Chinese maker, but these days their supply is very tight.

>> and I have to source from the Chinese maker, but these days their supply is very tight.


 we have to wait for 2 months if we purchase right now. Maybe I should go to business trip to fix our quantity as enough as possible.

>> we have to wait for 2 months if we made a purchase now. Maybe I should go for a business trip to fix our quantity as soon as possible.

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