two assignment
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Hi [이름]!!
There is a popular saying about the relationship between ascendancy and obligation : With great power comes great responsibility!
It means what it says, if you are put in a position of having a lot of power, you also have a lot more responsibility than a person who is not so powerful. The office boy is not very powerful so can s[이름]p easily at night, the CEO is responsible for a great many things and may have a lot of worries. The President or Prime Minister even more so, whole countries are their responsibility.
REMEMBER:
Prepositions of Time - at, in, on
We use:
at-for a PRECISE TIME
in-for MONTHS, YEARS, CENTURIES and LONG PERIODS
on-for DAYS and DATES
Look at these examples:
*I have a meeting at 9am.
*The shop closes at midnight.
*Jane went home at lunchtime.
*In England, it often snows in December.
*Do you think we will go to Jupiter in the future?
*There should be a lot of progress in the next century.
*Do you work on Mondays?
*Her birthday is on 20 November.
*Where will you be on New Year\'s Day?
~ Teacher Megan~
HERE ARE MY CORRECTIONS:
there are two important assignment I\'m doing these days.
>> Correct.
OR
>> I have two important assignments these days.
One is to source raw materials for manufacturing our own product in our factory from China.
>> Correct.
Recently the price for raw material is bullish, and the price of chinese maker was more expensive than Korean domestic price.
>> Correct.
Fortunately, a few days went by, the Chinese maker offered $20 cheaper price than to prior one. it would be workable price level,
>> Fortunately, a few days later, the Chinese maker offered a $20 cheaper price than the prior one. It would be on a workable price level,
even though it\'s slight higher level. we\'ll continue proceeding sample-test whether suitable for manufacturing or not.
>> even though it\'s slightly on a higher level. We\'ll continue proceeding sample-test to see whether its suitable for manufacturing or not.
Another is to source raw material for new business.
>> Correct.
it would be really challenging, I\'ve never experienced yet.
>> it would be a really challenging task, I\'ve never experienced something like it yet.
A target product is strange thing, which is not chemicals, our division have never handled before.
>> A target product is a strange thing, which is not chemicals and our division never handled that before.
and I have to source from Chinese maker, but these days their supply is very tight.
>> and I have to source from the Chinese maker, but these days their supply is very tight.
we have to wait for 2 months if we purchase right now. Maybe I should go to business trip to fix our quantity as enough as possible.
>> we have to wait for 2 months if we made a purchase now. Maybe I should go for a business trip to fix our quantity as soon as possible.
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