Two Computer Problems.
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I had two computer problems these days.
First, my computer didn\'t turn on.
I had to make a science PPT for my homework.
Then, I was very hurry, but I should wait it.
However, after 5 minutes, my computer was on!
Second, I installed a application.
However, I couldn\'t see that in my wallpaper.
To solve this problem, I turned off the computer and turned on again.
Then, the application was in my wallpaper.
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~~ Teacher Sharon
I had two computer problems these days.
>> Correct
First, my computer didn\'t turn on.
First, my computer didn\'t turn on.
>> Correct
I had to make a science PPT for my homework.
I had to make a science PPT for my homework.
>> I had to make a PPT for my Science homework.
Then, I was very hurry, but I should wait it.
Then, I was very hurry, but I should wait it.
>> I was in a hurry but I had to wait for it.
However, after 5 minutes, my computer was on!
However, after 5 minutes, my computer was on!
>> However, after 5 minutes, my computer turned on!
Second, I installed a application.
Second, I installed a application.
>> Second, I installed an application.
However, I couldn\'t see that in my wallpaper.
However, I couldn\'t see that in my wallpaper.
>> However, I couldn\'t see that on my desktop.
To solve this problem, I turned off the computer and turned on again.
To solve this problem, I turned off the computer and turned on again.
>> Correct
Then, the application was in my wallpaper.
Then, the application was in my wallpaper.
>> Then, I could finally see the application on my desktop.
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