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2014-06-19 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Good morning Debby :P It is a good day to go out with someone. But I should go to the library to study because I have two exams tommorow. Some friends already finished all their exmas. I'm really envying them. :'( But the weekend and the vacation is closer to me. Wow! It is a only day that I don't have any exam, so I could get enough sleep first during this weekend. But I'm not refreshed yet. I need more sleep but I have to go study again. And thank you for asking me probing questions because it give me chances to talk more in English. Take care :D <Essay> Are there no limits in volume or cost? If it is, I want to have my own house and a Play Station 4, and a car. I wish for playing a game in my own home and I have a car licence. So if I have a car, I can go to everywhere I want to go with my friends and family!

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Hi there [이름]^^ Thank you for sending me the homeworks!^^ How I wish I also have those things that you wished for. I hope that it comes true for you and maybe me too in the future!^^ We will do our best for that!^^ Thank you so much for your time. Mind your spelling and the proper tenses of your verbs. Take care^^ ^^T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you: Good morning Debby :P>> CORRECT OR> Good day to you pretty Debby^^.It is a good day to go out with someone. >> CORRECT OR> It\'s nice to spend a day with someone.  But I should go to the library to study because I have two exams tommorow. >> CORRECT OR> I need time in the library to prepare for my two exams coming up.^^ Some friends already finished all their exmas. >> CORRECT OR> A few of my friends are done with their exams already. I\'m really envying them. >> CORRECT OR> I really envy them.  :\'( But the weekend and the vacation is closer to me. Wow! >> CORRECT OR> It\'s near the weekend so I feel excited.It is a only day that I don\'t have any exam, so I could get enough sleep first during this weekend. >> It is only a day that I don\'t have any exams, do I could get enough sleep for this weekend. But I\'m not refreshed yet. >> CORRECT OR> I need more sleep. I need more sleep but I have to go study again.>> I want to sleep more but I have to study. And thank you for asking me probing questions because it give me chances to talk more in English.>> And thank you for asking me probing questions because it gives me chances to talk more in English.Take care :D >> CORRECT OR> Take lots of care.<Essay>Are there no limits in volume or cost? >> CORRECT OR> Is there a certain limit in value? If it is, I want to have my own house and a Play Station 4, and a car. >> CORRECT OR> I will wish for a house of my own, a Play station 4 and a car.^^ I wish for playing a game in my own home and I have a car licence. >> I wish to play a game in my own home and I have a car license. So if I have a car, I can go to everywhere I want to go with my friends and family! >> CORRECT Or> Having my own car means I can take my friends amd family everywhere.

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