Two final tests left
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning Debby :P
It is a good day to go out with someone. But I should go to the library to study because I have two exams tommorow. Some friends already finished all their exmas. I'm really envying them. :'( But the weekend and the vacation is closer to me. Wow!
It is a only day that I don't have any exam, so I could get enough sleep first during this weekend. But I'm not refreshed yet. I need more sleep but I have to go study again.
And thank you for asking me probing questions because it give me chances to talk more in English.
Take care :D
<Essay>
Are there no limits in volume or cost? If it is, I want to have my own house and a Play
Station 4, and a car. I wish for playing a game in my own home and I have a car licence. So if I have a car, I can go to everywhere I want to go with my friends and family!
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]^^
Thank you for sending me the homeworks!^^
How I wish I also have those things that you wished for.
I hope that it comes true for you and maybe me too in the future!^^
We will do our best for that!^^
Thank you so much for your time.
Mind your spelling and the proper tenses of your verbs.
Take care^^
^^T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you:
Good morning Debby :P>> CORRECT
OR> Good day to you pretty Debby^^.It is a good day to go out with someone.
>> CORRECT
OR> It\'s nice to spend a day with someone.
But I should go to the library to study because I have two exams tommorow.
>> CORRECT
OR> I need time in the library to prepare for my two exams coming up.^^
Some friends already finished all their exmas.
>> CORRECT
OR> A few of my friends are done with their exams already.
I\'m really envying them.
>> CORRECT
OR> I really envy them.
:\'( But the weekend and the vacation is closer to me. Wow!
>> CORRECT
OR> It\'s near the weekend so I feel excited.It is a only day that I don\'t have any exam, so I could get enough sleep first during this weekend.
>> It is only a day that I don\'t have any exams, do I could get enough sleep for this weekend.
But I\'m not refreshed yet.
>> CORRECT
OR> I need more sleep.
I need more sleep but I have to go study again.>> I want to sleep more but I have to study.
And thank you for asking me probing questions because it give me chances to talk more in English.>> And thank you for asking me probing questions because it gives me chances to talk more in English.Take care :D
>> CORRECT
OR> Take lots of care.<Essay>Are there no limits in volume or cost?
>> CORRECT
OR> Is there a certain limit in value?
If it is, I want to have my own house and a Play Station 4, and a car.
>> CORRECT
OR> I will wish for a house of my own, a Play station 4 and a car.^^
I wish for playing a game in my own home and I have a car licence.
>> I wish to play a game in my own home and I have a car license.
So if I have a car, I can go to everywhere I want to go with my friends and family!
>> CORRECT
Or> Having my own car means I can take my friends amd family everywhere.
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