Two options to react about mistake
학생이 쓴 원문
I have made lots of mistake during my life. whenever I make a mistake, There are only two options about how to deal with it. admit or deny. maybe avoiding responsibility is a self-defense to being embarrassed. But the other knows whether you try to avoid it or not. I think Admitting your mistake had better than Denying your mistake when it comes to healthy relationship.
강사 첨삭
Hi John!
Always be careful of the use of pronouns and capitalization.
Avoid repeating the same words and expressions.
Explore other ways to express your ideas.
This is a good composition.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I have made lots of mistake during my life.
>> I have made lots of mistakes in my life.
whenever I make a mistake, There are only two options about how to deal with it.
>> Whenever I make a mistake, there are only two ways I deal with it.
admit or deny.
>> I either admit it or deny it.
maybe avoiding responsibility is a self-defense to being embarrassed.
>> Maybe, avoiding responsibility is a defense mechanism brought about by being embarrassed.
But the other knows whether you try to avoid it or not.
>> However, the other person would always know whether you\'re trying to avoid the mistake or not.
I think Admitting your mistake had better than Denying your mistake when it comes to healthy relationship.
>> I think admitting your mistake is better than denying it when it comes to healthy relationships.
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