two part time jobs

2011-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Julie

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From this Monday, I'm working two part time jobs. One is grading a trial test papers. Many freshmen and sophomores in my college prepare the civil service examination. I grade their economics test scores. I think, it is worthwhile because it is the work to help my younger friends. Also, payment of this work is so good. I spend about 2 hours a day for it. Another is the clerical assistance in my college office. Actually, its payment is not so good but it is okay because it is a very simple work. All I have to do is sitting in the office and answering the phone. I can go to the office whenever I want before 6 p.m. so I usually go there between my classes. I have to go to the office 6 hours a week. I'm very busy nowdays but I feel happy.

강사 첨삭

My Dear [이름], Having two jobs at the same time maybe tiring but I’m glad that you are happy in what you’re doing… keep up the good work! ~~ God bless, T. Faye   From this Monday, I'm working two part time jobs. >>This Monday, I’m going starting working two part time jobs. One is grading a trial test papers. >>One of which is grading trial tests papers. Many freshmen and sophomores in my college prepare the civil service examination. >> Many freshmen and sophomores in my college are preparing for the civil service examination. I grade their economics test scores. >>CORRECT^^ I think, it is worthwhile because it is the work to help my younger friends. >>I think that it would be worthwhile to work and help my younger friends. Also, payment of this work is so good. >>Also, the salary is good. I spend about 2 hours a day for it. >>CORRECT^^Another is the clerical assistance in my college office. >>Second, is that I work as a clerical assistant in our college office. Actually, its payment is not so good but it is okay because it is a very simple work.  >>Actually, the salary is not so good but it’s okay because it’s just a simple job. All I have to do is sitting in the office and answering the phone.  >>All I have to do is to sit down and answer phone calls. I can go to the office whenever I want before 6 p.m. so I usually go there between my classes. >>CORRECT^^ I have to go to the office 6 hours a week. >>CORRECT^^  I'm very busy nowdays but I feel happy. >>I’m very busy now a days but I feel happy.

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