two part time jobs
학생이 쓴 원문
From this Monday, I'm working two part time jobs. One is grading a trial test papers. Many freshmen and sophomores in my college prepare the civil service examination. I grade their economics test scores. I think, it is worthwhile because it is the work to help my younger friends. Also, payment of this work is so good. I spend about 2 hours a day for it.
Another is the clerical assistance in my college office. Actually, its payment is not so good but it is okay because it is a very simple work. All I have to do is sitting in the office and answering the phone. I can go to the office whenever I want before 6 p.m. so I usually go there between my classes. I have to go to the office 6 hours a week. I'm very busy nowdays but I feel happy.
강사 첨삭
My Dear [이름],
Having two jobs at the same time maybe tiring but I’m glad that you are happy in what you’re doing… keep up the good work! ~~
God bless,
T. Faye
From this Monday, I'm working two part time jobs.
>>This Monday, I’m going starting working two part time jobs.
One is grading a trial test papers.
>>One of which is grading trial tests papers.
Many freshmen and sophomores in my college prepare the civil service examination.
>> Many freshmen and sophomores in my college are preparing for the civil service examination.
I grade their economics test scores.
>>CORRECT^^
I think, it is worthwhile because it is the work to help my younger friends.
>>I think that it would be worthwhile to work and help my younger friends.
Also, payment of this work is so good.
>>Also, the salary is good.
I spend about 2 hours a day for it.
>>CORRECT^^Another is the clerical assistance in my college office.
>>Second, is that I work as a clerical assistant in our college office.
Actually, its payment is not so good but it is okay because it is a very simple work.
>>Actually, the salary is not so good but it’s okay because it’s just a simple job.
All I have to do is sitting in the office and answering the phone.
>>All I have to do is to sit down and answer phone calls.
I can go to the office whenever I want before 6 p.m. so I usually go there between my classes.
>>CORRECT^^
I have to go to the office 6 hours a week.
>>CORRECT^^
I'm very busy nowdays but I feel happy.
>>I’m very busy now a days but I feel happy.
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