two weeks ago, I watched the movie named "gravity"

2013-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Q1 - They ____ be on holiday, but I'm not sure. may Q2 - You ____ be right, but I'd still like to check. could Q3 - ____ you turn it down a bit please? Can Q4 - It's OK- you ____ go when you've finished. may Q5 - Ask any questions now as you _ not talk during the test. may Q6 - You _ smoke in the cinema. can't Q7 - From the way he speaks, he _ be from London. could I watched a movie named gravity. It was kind of disaster movie in the space. I think may be Apolo 13 is same kind of movie. When it comes to go space, for whom, It is a dream. Yes, going to space is very terific! I am still dreaming of going space. Even a monkey went to there for free!! but.. I think it twice after watching this movie. IF an accident is caused by unpredictable reason, who can care for me? No one can help me. wow, it is very scary sound. but I think going to space is still someone's dream including me.

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Hello there again [이름]! Yes, I do agree with you. It sounds scary. I think If I am in that kind of situation, I don\'t know what to do. I like watching disaster and horror movies. ^^ Marvelous job with your homework! You got a perfect score! Modals is already easy for you!^^ Keep it up! Learn more expressions and try to compose longer sentences. ^^ See you! Take Care! Enjoy the rest of the day! Teacher Nina   Q1 - They ____ be on holiday, but I\'m not sure.may >> Correct! Q2 - You ____ be right, but I\'d still like to check.could >> Correct! Q3 - ____ you turn it down a bit please?Can >> Correct! Q4 - It\'s OK- you ____ go when you\'ve finished.may >> Correct! Q5 - Ask any questions now as you _ not talk during the test.may >> Correct! Q6 - You _ smoke in the cinema.can\'t >> Correct! Q7 - From the way he speaks, he _ be from London.could >> Correct! I watched a movie named gravity. >> I watched a movie titled \"Gravity\".It was kind of disaster movie in the space. >> It was a kind of disaster movie in space.I think may be Apolo 13 is same kind of movie. >> I think \"Apollo 13\" ss the same kind of movie. >> OR: I think the movie \"Apollo 13\" is the same with \"Gravity.\"When it comes to go space, for whom, It is a dream. >> Did you mean: When it comes to going to space for whom it is considered as a dream.Yes, going to space is very terific! >> Correct! >> OR: Going to space is a terrific experience.I am still dreaming of going space. >> Correct! Even a monkey went to there for free!! >> Even a monkey went there for free.but.. I think it twice after watching this movie. >> But I had second thoughts after watching the movie.IF an accident is caused by unpredictable reason, who can care for me? >> If an accident is cause by an unpredictable reason, who will take good care of me? >> OR: If an accident is cause by unwanted circumstances, who will take good care fo me?No one can help me. wow, it is very scary sound. >> No one can help me. Wow! It sounds scary.but I think going to space is still someone\'s dream including me. >> Correct!

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