types of dites
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I have heard of many things.
Eat one food, eat only meat and starve.
But the system of our bodies is not simple.
In this way makes you nervous and the healy is getting worse too.
If you care too much about dieting rather fail.
Regular meal times and balanced food, morderate exercise is the best way.
I think It`s the much better to stick to your mood than to be special.
This is from my long experience.
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Hi Mrs. [Name]! Thank you for doing your homework. Please keep up the good work. Have a nice day. -T. Jasper
Here are your corrections:
>> CORRECT
>> One of which are, eating only one food. Another is eating meat only and then starve themselves.
>> But, the system of our bodies are not simple.
>> It will only make you nervous and make your health worse.
Regular meal times and balanced food, morderate exercise is the best way.
>> If you care too much about dieting then eating regularly with balanced food and moderate exercise is the best way.
>> I think it\'s better to be yourself than to become special.
>> This is basing from my long experience.
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