typhoon will reach korea

typhoon will be comming korea. but now(17:40) it is not rainning, just the wind is getting up the brodcast said, this typhoon will damage very big(?) my wife is working at a bank. And my son have to go kindergarden. he just 3years old. I think he should be took care of his mother but he should go..... this day is my job to bring a my son. because my wife will be working till late at night it is very hard for me to write english letter. I wrote this letter for 30minutes... I don't want to rain until bring my baby............ But it is darking very quickly maby it will start rain soon....... see you next day in the morning

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typhoon will be comming korea.

>>Typhoon will be coming to Korea.
but now(17:40) it is not rainning, just the wind is getting up

>> But now is 17:40 and it is not raining yet, just winds rising up.
the brodcast said, this typhoon will damage very big(?)

>> The broadcast said this typhoon will damage very heavily.
my wife is working at a bank.

>>Correct.
And my son have to go kindergarden.

>> And my son has to go to kindergarten.

he just 3years old.

>> He is just 3years old.

I think he should be took care of his mother but he should go.....

>> I think he should be taken care of his mother but he should go.
this day is my job to bring a my son. because my wife will be working till late at night

>> This day is my job to bring my son to school because my wife will be working till late at night.
it is very hard for me to write english letter.

>> It is very hard for me to write an English letter.

I wrote this letter for 30minutes...

>> Correct. (just remove {