typical animal in south korea
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tiger is one of the most famous and typical animals in korea.but we can only see tiger in zoo. because when korea was ruled by japan, many japanese hunted tiger to dampen korean\\\'s spirits. and the shape of the Korean Peninsula is similar to that of a tiger lying down. now the number of tigers is decreasing. So we have to protect them.
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tiger is one of the most famous and typical animals in korea. but we can only see tiger in zoo.
>> The tiger is one of the most famous and typical animals in Korea, but we can only see it in a zoo.
because when korea was ruled by japan, many japanese hunted tiger to dampen korean\\\'s spirits.
>> Because when Japan ruled Korea, many Japanese hunted tigers to lower the spirits of the Koreans.
and the shape of the Korean Peninsula is similar to that of a tiger lying down.
>> And the Korean Peninsula is shaped like a tiger lying down.
now the number of tigers is decreasing.
>> The number of tigers is now decreasing.
So we have to protect them.
>> Correct!
OR: We must protect them.
OR: We must protect them.
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