Typoon comes Korea
학생이 쓴 원문
Today typoon comes Korea. Jeju Island is a little full of water.But there is no affect in Seoul now. But there will be a lot of rain with a typoon from evening to tommorrow morning. Tommorrow there will be a no school. Tommorrow I will eat vietnam fried rice. It is really tasty.
강사 첨삭
Today typoon comes Korea.
>> Today, the typhoon will come to Korea.
Jeju Island is a little full of water.
>> Correct
or
>> Jeju Island is already full of water.
But there is no affect in Seoul now.
>> But there is no effect in Seoul now.
But there will be a lot of rain with a typoon from evening to tommorrow morning.
>> But with the typhoon, there will be a lot of rain from this evening to tomorrow morning.
Tommorrow there will be a no school.
>> Tomorrow, there will be no classes.
Tommorrow (Tomorrow) I will eat vietnam fried rice. It is really tasty.
>> Correct
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