typoon vs earthquake

2016-10-20 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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I heard that your country has a typoon.In Korea,there is a earthquake before Thanksgiving day.Because of earthquake,I didn't go to the field trip.Gyeongju has a lot of history but it is not safe region because of earthquake.Is your country's typoon is severe?Are you okay?

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Hi, [이름]!   Thank you for the concern. ^.^ Yes, I\'m okay. I\'m sorry that I wasn\'t able to talk to you today. The typhoon was very strong because it was a super typhoon. I\'ll see you on Tuesday! Have a great weekend my dear!   _Teacher Dianne ^.^   I heard that your country has a typoon. >> I heard that your country has a typhoon. In Korea,there is a earthquake before Thanksgiving day. >> In Korea, there was an earthquake before Thanksgiving day. Because of earthquake,I didn\'t go to the field trip. >> Because of the earthquake, I didn\'t go to the field trip. >> Or: Because of that earthquake, I wasn\'t able to go to the field trip. Gyeongju has a lot of history but it is not safe region because of earthquake. >> Gyeongju has a lot of history, but it is not a safe region because of earthquakes. Is your country\'s typoon is severe? >> Is your country\'s typhoon severe? >> Or: Do you have a strong typhoon? Are you okay? >> Correct

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