typoon vs earthquake
학생이 쓴 원문
I heard that your country has a typoon.In Korea,there is a earthquake before Thanksgiving day.Because of earthquake,I didn't go to the field trip.Gyeongju has a lot of history but it is not safe region because of earthquake.Is your country's typoon is severe?Are you okay?
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for the concern. ^.^
Yes, I\'m okay.
I\'m sorry that I wasn\'t able to talk to you today.
The typhoon was very strong because it was a super typhoon.
I\'ll see you on Tuesday! Have a great weekend my dear!
_Teacher Dianne ^.^
I heard that your country has a typoon.
>> I heard that your country has a typhoon.
In Korea,there is a earthquake before Thanksgiving day.
>> In Korea, there was an earthquake before Thanksgiving day.
Because of earthquake,I didn\'t go to the field trip.
>> Because of the earthquake, I didn\'t go to the field trip.
>> Or: Because of that earthquake, I wasn\'t able to go to the field trip.
Gyeongju has a lot of history but it is not safe region because of earthquake.
>> Gyeongju has a lot of history, but it is not a safe region because of earthquakes.
Is your country\'s typoon is severe?
>> Is your country\'s typhoon severe?
>> Or: Do you have a strong typhoon?
Are you okay?
>> Correct
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