UCC
학생이 쓴 원문
We did homework last week. It is school's team homework.We made a UCC.We took a video clip almost five hours.It was a little fun.We don't know how to work using computer.My friend's dad didn't know how to work using computer too. Maybe the version of the computer was not same.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Have a great day!
Thank you for doing your composition for today.
I think that doing a homework with other people is something fun.
You can help each other and you can have more ideas to have a better or more creative output.
Anyway, I hope that you had a solution to your problem.
Good luck in your homewok. I believe that your team can make it.
~~ Teacher Kris
We did homework last week.
>>> We did our homework last week.
It is school\'s team homework.
>>> It is the school team\'s homework.
We made a UCC.
>>> Correct!
We took a video clip almost five hours.
>>> We took a video clip for almost five hours.
It was a little fun.
>>> Correct!
We don\'t know how to work using computer.
>>> We didn\'t know how to use the applications on the computer.
My friend\'s dad didn\'t know how to work using computer too.
>>> My friends dad didn\'t know how to use the applications on the computer.
Maybe the version of the computer was not same.
>>> Maybe the version of the computer is different.
OR >> Maybe the computer has a different version.
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