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I don't know...
I have some,, stressful situation about my test result.
My father is teacher and his coworker is teacher too.
they shere many similar thing. their age is similar.
and their financial situation is similar( both of them are middle class )
the size of their car is similar.
and the even their age of childran is similar.
that is the root of problem.
My parent specailly my father want to make me better person than coworker's kid.
because he is a teacher, he want to be a good teacher of his son too(the son is me.)
I had to prove the fact that my father is also good teacher in home and the way of his teaching is right or better than his coworker.
Whenever I finished my exam, he asked me a socore, I felt very irritated.
I haven't loose in a test score aganist coworker's son.
I felt really irritated at that time, but,, I think It was also a style of his education.
강사 첨삭
That was great, [이름]!
It is nice that you were able to prove that you are better.
I am glad that you always look at the brighter side of things.
Keep it up! Always deal with your problems or trials as a challenge.
I love that kind of attitude. It will help you to achieve your goals in the future.
Teacher Nina
>> Correct!
I have some,, stressful situation about my test result.
I have some,, stressful situation about my test result.
>> I had a stressful situation about my test result.
>> OR: I was stressed because of my test result.
My father is teacher and his coworker is teacher too.
My father is teacher and his coworker is teacher too.
>> My father is a teacher and his co-worker too.
they shere many similar thing. their age is similar.
they shere many similar thing. their age is similar.
>> They have a lot of things in common such as their age.
>> OR: They have a lot of similarities such as their age.
and their financial situation is similar( both of them are middle class )
and their financial situation is similar( both of them are middle class )
>> Their financial status is also similar, middle class.
the size of their car is similar.
>> The size of their car is simiar.
>> The size of their car is simiar.
and the even their age of childran is similar.
>> And even the ages of their children are similar.
that is the root of problem.
that is the root of problem.
>> That is the root of my problem.
>> OR: That is the cause of my problem.
My parent specailly my father want to make me better person than coworker\'s kid.
>> My parents, especially my father want to make me a better person than his co-worker\'s kid.
because he is a teacher, he want to be a good teacher of his son too(the son is me.)
because he is a teacher, he want to be a good teacher of his son too(the son is me.)
>> Because he is a teacher, he wants to be a good mentor to his son too.
I had to prove the fact that my father is also good teacher in home and the way of his teaching is right or better than his coworker.
>> I had to prove the fact that my father is also a good teacher at home and the way he teaches me is right or better than his co-worker.
Whenever I finished my exam, he asked me a socore, I felt very irritated.
I had to prove the fact that my father is also good teacher in home and the way of his teaching is right or better than his coworker.
>> I had to prove the fact that my father is also a good teacher at home and the way he teaches me is right or better than his co-worker.
Whenever I finished my exam, he asked me a socore, I felt very irritated.
>> Whenever I am finished with my exams, he asked me about my score and I felt very irritated.
I haven\'t loose in a test score aganist coworker\'s son.
>> Did you mean: I always had a good score compared to his co-worker\'s son.
I haven\'t loose in a test score aganist coworker\'s son.
>> Did you mean: I always had a good score compared to his co-worker\'s son.
I felt really irritated at that time, but,, I think It was also a style of his education.
>> I felt really irritated at that time but I think it was also his style of teaching me.
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