um It is difficult to answer it.
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Hello!!..A wonderful Monday to you! I have read your composition and I can tell that you can express yourself in English well.
I just noticed that you have to check your grammar. Anyway, practice makes perfect. Keep up the good work. Enjoy the rest of the day!
_T. NINA_
um It is difficult to answer it.
>> It is difficult to answer.
because only museum did I visit was Louvre.
>> Louvre is the only museum I visited.
and I haven\'t been any other museum When I was travelling.
>> When I was travelling, I haven\'t been to any other museum.
but I think most people visit museum because they want to understand their culture.
>> But I think most people visit museums because they want to understand their cultures.
and last friday, we met at 7 P.m
>> Last Friday, we met at 7 PM.
We ate spicy chicken foot.
>> CORRECT!
but she doesn\'t like spicy food. because she dosen\'t eat well.
>> But she doesn\'t like spicy food and she doesn\'t eat well.
We ate that lightly then we were looking for chicken restaurant.
>> We didn\'t eat that much. After that, we were looking/checking a restaurant serving chicken.
Finally we found a shop. we enjoyed our dinner.
>> Finally we found a shop and we enjoyed our dinner.
and we went to cafeteria where the interior was very good.
>> After that/Afterward we went to a cafeteria where the interior was very good.
It looks like garden where have some trees, flowers.
>> It looks like a garden where they have some trees and flowers.
It was cold weather, but I could feel warm inside of the building.
>> It was a cold weather, but I could feel the warmth inside the building.
(Actually, The store kept on a heater. :p )
>> Actually, the store has a heater.
In that place, Carolyn wrote her diary and I submitted some homeworks.
>> While we were in that place, Carolyn wrote her diary and I submitted some homework.
Whenever I submit my homework, I feel some kind of achievement.
>> Whenever I submit my homework, I feel I have achieved something.
We stayed that cafeteria right before the closing time.
>> We stayed at the cafeteria right before the closing time.^^
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