um It is difficult to answer it.

2014-01-20 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

um It is difficult to answer it. because only museum did I visit was Louvre. and I haven't been any other museum When I was travelling. but I think most people visit museum because they want to understand their culture. --------- and last friday, we met at 7 P.m We ate spicy chicken foot. but she doesn't like spicy food. because she dosen't eat well. We ate that lightly then we were looking for chicken restaurant. Finally we found a shop. we enjoyed our dinner. and we went to cafeteria where the interior was very good. It looks like garden where have some trees, flowers. It was cold weather, but I could feel warm inside of the building. (Actually, The store kept on a heater. :p ) In that place, Carolyn wrote her diary and I submitted some homeworks. Whenever I submit my homework, I feel some kind of achievement. We stayed that cafeteria right before the closing time.

강사 첨삭

Hello!!..A wonderful Monday to you! I have read your composition and I can tell that you can express yourself in English well.

I just noticed that you have to check your grammar. Anyway, practice makes perfect. Keep up the good work. Enjoy the rest of the day!

_T. NINA_


um It is difficult to answer it.

>> It is difficult to answer.
because only museum did I visit was Louvre.

>> Louvre is the only museum I visited.
and I haven\'t been any other museum When I was travelling.

>> When I was travelling, I haven\'t been to any other museum.
but I think most people visit museum because they want to understand their culture.

>> But I think most people visit museums because they want to understand their cultures.
and last friday, we met at 7 P.m

>> Last Friday, we met at 7 PM.
We ate spicy chicken foot.

>> CORRECT!
but she doesn\'t like spicy food. because she dosen\'t eat well.

>> But she doesn\'t like spicy food and she doesn\'t eat well.
We ate that lightly then we were looking for chicken restaurant.

>> We didn\'t eat that much. After that, we were looking/checking a restaurant serving chicken.
Finally we found a shop. we enjoyed our dinner.

>> Finally we found a shop and we enjoyed our dinner.
and we went to cafeteria where the interior was very good.

>> After that/Afterward we went to a cafeteria where the interior was very good.
It looks like garden where have some trees, flowers.

>> It looks like a garden where they have some trees and flowers.
It was cold weather, but I could feel warm inside of the building.

>> It was a cold weather, but I could feel the warmth inside the building.
(Actually, The store kept on a heater. :p )

>> Actually, the store has a heater.
In that place, Carolyn wrote her diary and I submitted some homeworks.

>> While we were in that place, Carolyn wrote her diary and I submitted some homework.
Whenever I submit my homework, I feel some kind of achievement.

>> Whenever I submit my homework, I feel I have achieved something.
We stayed that cafeteria right before the closing time.

>> We stayed at the cafeteria right before the closing time.^^

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·