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2013-12-02 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1) Jack had_ fun at the party last Saturday. 2) I'm sorry, but I have to go now. 3) have you ever been to Canada? 4) Dave has passed his driving test. 5) Can we have the bill, please? 6) The match has already started when we arrived. 7) They had breakfast at 6:30 this morning. 8) Do you have a brother? 9) My boss never has time. Do you remember what I said to you?? teacher? I had been to historic darama set with my girl friend. we had a great time. It was almost mountain, so we need walk. To go to the top, we have to spend time about 3hours. At the start of our journey, we thought we could reach to the top. but it was'nt easy as we thought. So we took some photoes in traditional house. she really liked our photoes. After hiking, we felt hungry. We stated to seek a restaurant for dinner, but We found ceramic market where we could make our own ceramic. We made ceramics for each other. It was really great time

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Hello there! A beautiful morning! How are doing?Thanks for religiously doing your homework! Your effort is greatly appreciated.  Here are your corrections. Kindly look into them:) See you in class! ~~T. Nina^^ 1) Jack had_ fun at the party last Saturday.  >> Correct!2) I\'m sorry, but I have to go now. >> Correct!3) have you ever been to Canada? >> Correct!4) Dave has passed his driving test. >> Correct!5) Can we have the bill, please? >> Correct!6) The match has already started when we arrived. >> Correct!7) They had breakfast at 6:30 this morning. >> Correct!8) Do you have a brother? >> Correct!9) My boss never has time.>> Correct! Do you remember what I said to you?? teacher? >> Do you remember what I told you, teacher?I had been to historic darama set with my girl friend. >> I had been to a historic drama set with my girlfriend.we had a great time. >> Correct! >> OR: We had a great time.It was almost mountain, so we need walk. >> It was almost on top of a mountain so we had to walk.To go to the top, we have to spend time about 3hours. >> To reach the top, we had to spend about three hours walking.At the start of our journey, we thought we could reach to the top. >> At the start of our journey, we thought we could reach the top.but it was\'nt easy as we thought. >> But it wasn\'t easy.So we took some photoes in traditional house. >> So we took some photos in a traditional house.she really liked our photoes. >> She really liked our photos.After hiking, we felt hungry. >> Correct!We stated to seek a restaurant for dinner, >> We started to seek for a restaurant to have dinner.but We found ceramic market where we could make our own ceramic. >> But instead we found a ceramic market where we could make our own ceramics.We made ceramics for each other. >> Correct!It was really great time >> It was really a great time. >> OR: We really had a great time.

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