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2010-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 tim

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hello, abby! I think a mixture of the file list and textbook no display to page. i hope so aforetime next class time next topic notice. well, What do you think about book changing ? I do not think you know anything about you. i want know you. lol where are you form?

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Hello [이름]!   Yes you're right. Some pages couldn't be open. So I think it's your decision if  you would want to change the book. But if you're confused with it I think I'll recommend you CAN YOU BELIEVE IT 1. This book will give you knowledge on IDIOMS and EXPRESSIONS and of course vocabulary test that could help you in speaking. Just tell me your opinion about it... Thank  you for writing! Have a great day!   T. Abby "_)      Here are my corrections for you: I think a mixture of the file list and textbook no display to page. >> I think some pages of the book couldn't be open.  i hope so aforetime next class time next topic notice. >> I hope that you will always remind me of the things that we will do on the next day. well, What do you think about book changing>> Well, what do you think about changing our book.I do not think you know anything about you. >> I don't know a lot about you. >> I don't know you much. I want know you >> I want to know you more. >> I want to know more about you. where are you form >> Where are you from?  

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