Unable to stop moving
학생이 쓴 원문
I would rather keep moving in the sun.
I prefer active things on a sunny day to stay in an office.
It is easy to sick and tired of doing an office work!
강사 첨삭
We are really a like. :) But, I want to ask, can you imagine how we look like if we can\'t stop moving under the sun? Won\'t we look like wriggling worms? haha
I would rather keep moving in the sun.
>> Correct.
I prefer active things on a sunny day to stay in an office.
>> I prefer being active on a sunny day than to stay in an office.
It is easy to sick and tired of doing an office work!
>> It is easy to get sick and be tired of doing office works!
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