unbelievable
학생이 쓴 원문
The host\'s jokes and humor are important factors of formal ceremony.
I can\'t understand that the host jocked and some of the participant laughed, some felt uncomfort.
When the host said \"Jada I love~~\" Smith\'s wife showed displeasure face.
Even though Simth\'s behavior and attitude are vular too seriously.
The place is a formal ceremony for world everyone.
His behavior is to him make look like person who can\'t control his emotion.
He should be punished by law.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]!
I am glad that you were able to give a reaction on this video. People have different responses on the situation but who do you think is at fault?
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Enjoy the weekend.
Aki~
The host\'s jokes and humor are important factors of formal ceremony.
>>> The host\'s jokes and humor are important factors in a formal ceremony.
I can\'t understand that the host jocked and some of the participant laughed, some felt uncomfort.
>>> I can\'t understand that the host joked and some of the participants laughed, some felt discomfort.
When the host said \"Jada I love~~\" Smith\'s wife showed displeasure face.
>>> When the host said \"Jada I love~~\" Smith\'s wife showed a displeasure face.
Even though Simth\'s behavior and attitude are vular too seriously.
>>> Even though Simth\'s behavior and attitude are vulgar and serious.
The place is a formal ceremony for world everyone.
>>> The place is a formal ceremony for everyone.
His behavior is to him make look like person who can\'t control his emotion.
>>> His behavior made him look like a person who can\'t control his emotion.
He should be punished by law.
>>> Correct!
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