Unconditional help
학생이 쓴 원문
In fact, I believe that the things I can effectively affect my friends are in the recruiting season to overcome blurriness and fear of failure.
I have given them a lot of advices until now since I started career earlier than other peer.
I actually revised a letter of self-introduction and draw expected questions of interviews for them.
Additionally, because I already had experienced the change of job, I have conveyed some tips related to the way of resignment.
Like this, if my friends ask for supports that I know the way, I would help them without any rewards.
I also have gotten many benefits from my friends unconsciously.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [Name] [이름]! Impressive commitment to supporting friends in their careers! Your proactive approach in sharing advice and experiences is commendable. It\'s great to see a mutually beneficial friendship and willingness to help without expecting anything in return.
~T. Jenna
In fact, I believe that the things I can effectively affect my friends are in the recruiting season to overcome blurriness and fear of failure.
>>In fact, I believe that the things I can effectively influence among my friends occur during the recruiting season, helping them overcome blurriness and the fear of failure.
I have given them a lot of advices until now since I started career earlier than other peer.
I have given them a lot of advices until now since I started career earlier than other peer.
>>I have given them a lot of advice until now since I started my career earlier than my other peers.
I actually revised a letter of self-introduction and draw expected questions of interviews for them.
I actually revised a letter of self-introduction and draw expected questions of interviews for them.
>>I actually revised a letter of self-introduction and drew expected questions for interviews for them.
Additionally, because I already had experienced the change of job, I have conveyed some tips related to the way of resignment.
Additionally, because I already had experienced the change of job, I have conveyed some tips related to the way of resignment.
>>Additionally, because I have already experienced a job change, I have conveyed some tips related to the process of resignation.
Like this, if my friends ask for supports that I know the way, I would help them without any rewards.
Like this, if my friends ask for supports that I know the way, I would help them without any rewards.
>>Like this, if my friends ask for support and I know the way, I would help them without any rewards.
OR
>>If my friends ask for support and I know the way, I would help them without expecting anything in return.
I also have gotten many benefits from my friends unconsciously.
I also have gotten many benefits from my friends unconsciously.
Correct, or
>>I have also unconsciously gained many benefits from my friends.
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