Under the stress
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Sometimes, I am under lots of stress.
Especially when I am busy in a workplace, I feel lots of stress.
At that time, I take a deep breath and try to think positively
and do not rush.
Just do my work one by one in order of priority.
After work , I go for a drink or do some exercise to reduce stress.
Marriage is stressful? it's case by case.
If they can handle the problem , they won't be under lots of stress.
If they not, it will be very stressful for both of them.
Yesterday, I watched a TV program about happy marriage and unhappy marriage.
It said that how to talk is important for happy marriage life.
When couple fights, they tend to ignore or be easily upset.
It won't help.
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Hello my dear [이름],
Thank you so much for dropping in your composition tonight..:)
Can\'t say anything, but...Great job!
I\'ll see you again tomorrow my dear and have a good night..^^
T.Cam
Sometimes, I am under lots of stress.
>>correct!Especially when I am busy in a workplace, I feel lots of stress.
>>correct!At that time, I take a deep breath and try to think positively and do not rush.
>>correct!Just do my work one by one in order of priority.
>>correct!After work , I go for a drink or do some exercise to reduce stress.>>correct!Marriage is stressful? it\'s case by case.
>>Marriage can be stressful, but it\'s a case to case basis.If they can handle the problem , they won\'t be under lots of stress.
>>correct!If they not, it will be very stressful for both of them.
>>If they don\'t then they\'re gonna be in a lot of pressure.Yesterday, I watched a TV program about happy marriage and unhappy marriage.
>>correct!It said that how to talk is important for happy marriage life.
>>They said that communication will be a key to a happy married life.When couple fights, they tend to ignore or be easily upset.
>>correct!It won\'t help.
>>correct!
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