undernine
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Hi there! I came to Chang-won city which is close to my hometown to shopping. Because we are going to attend the Masquerade next Friday. So we have to match the dress code. After shopping we drank tea and latte coffee with bread.
In my opinion, when someone are in a lot of debt and doesn’t have money, they can undermine trust in the relationships or reduce their confidence and power. I was on the verge of bankruptcy, and now I\'m recovering, and I\'m going to the real estate to consult for an apartment contract tomorrow. So I am not to undernine.
Anyway thank you for teaching me with new word every day. Have a nice day.
강사 첨삭
Hi, William^^
Thank you for sharing.
That\'s a good situation to use the word \'undermine\'.
Thank you for sending the photo too.
It looks appetizing!
Enjoy your day off!
_T. SHAY^^
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Hi there!
>>Corect
OR: Hey there!
I came to Chang-won city which is close to my hometown to shopping. Because we are going to attend the Masquerade next Friday.
>>I came to Changwon City, which is close to my hometown, to shop because we are going to attend the Masquerade next Friday.
OR: I came to Changwon, which is close to my hometown, to buy things for the Masquerade next Friday.
So we have to match the dress code.
>>So we have to follow the dress code.
OR: We need to wear something that fits the dress code.
After shopping we drank tea and latte coffee with bread.
>>After shopping, we drank tea and latte and ate some bread.
In my opinion, when someone are in a lot of debt and doesn’t have money, they can undermine trust in the relationships or reduce their confidence and power.
>>In my opinion, when someone is in a lot debt and doesn\'t have money, it can undermine trust in their relationships or reduce their confidence and sense of power.
OR: When someone is heavily in debt, it can weaken their relationships and reduce their confidence.
I was on the verge of bankruptcy, and now I\'m recovering, and I\'m going to the real estate to consult for an apartment contract tomorrow. So I am not to undernine.
>>I was on the verge of bankruptcy, but now I\'m recovering. Tomorrow I\'m going to a real estate agency to consult about an apartment contract, so my financial stability won\'t be undermined again.
Anyway thank you for teaching me with new word every day.
>>Anyway thank you for teaching me a new word every day.
Have a nice day.
>>Correct
OR: Enjoy your day!
Thank you for sharing.
That\'s a good situation to use the word \'undermine\'.
Thank you for sending the photo too.
It looks appetizing!
Enjoy your day off!
_T. SHAY^^
***
Hi there!
>>Corect
OR: Hey there!
I came to Chang-won city which is close to my hometown to shopping. Because we are going to attend the Masquerade next Friday.
>>I came to Changwon City, which is close to my hometown, to shop because we are going to attend the Masquerade next Friday.
OR: I came to Changwon, which is close to my hometown, to buy things for the Masquerade next Friday.
So we have to match the dress code.
>>So we have to follow the dress code.
OR: We need to wear something that fits the dress code.
After shopping we drank tea and latte coffee with bread.
>>After shopping, we drank tea and latte and ate some bread.
In my opinion, when someone are in a lot of debt and doesn’t have money, they can undermine trust in the relationships or reduce their confidence and power.
>>In my opinion, when someone is in a lot debt and doesn\'t have money, it can undermine trust in their relationships or reduce their confidence and sense of power.
OR: When someone is heavily in debt, it can weaken their relationships and reduce their confidence.
I was on the verge of bankruptcy, and now I\'m recovering, and I\'m going to the real estate to consult for an apartment contract tomorrow. So I am not to undernine.
>>I was on the verge of bankruptcy, but now I\'m recovering. Tomorrow I\'m going to a real estate agency to consult about an apartment contract, so my financial stability won\'t be undermined again.
Anyway thank you for teaching me with new word every day.
>>Anyway thank you for teaching me a new word every day.
Have a nice day.
>>Correct
OR: Enjoy your day!
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